harshita3chaarag

hey.. I really liked your poem.. It flowed well and good thing by avoiding the rhyme.. only thing I felt that could be improved was the neding.. I think you ...

hello... Okay, I just loved your poem!! It was so deep!! Also I loved how you've started each stanza with that 'Let's Pretend' line.. I really couldn't find anything to ...

Hi there.. So I was a bit intrigued because I have also written a poem called 'Letting Go' ( not put on YWS yet).. I think the concept was good. ...

Hello.. Well since I've never spoken or read or heard Spanish (except on TV), I can't comment on the Spanish version.. I was clueless in that.. But I just loved ...

Hello.. You know I really like these lyrics.. Specially the Chorus.. And I love the word play In para 1 in the last 2-3 lines.. Its a bit confusing, yup, ...

SO I guess this is THE shortest short story posted on YWS.. But this is just how I could put it.. Please review and let me know if you find ...

Hi everyone.. So this one needs serious repair.. Guys please help me improve this.. This is an important one and needs to be really good.. Please help me make it ...

so this is a good poem you've put.. Though I would give you the same advice as the reviewer before me.. I think besides that it was really good... The ...

Hi.. Your lyrics are really good.. I loved the emotions emanating from it the whole while.. you've expressed them brilliantly.. The only thing I thought could be changed for the ...

Hi again.. So I was immediately captured.. I did find a few errors.. But overall I think it was as good as the last time.. Specially the ending bit.. That ...

So as you wanted me to review.. I'm right here.. Yeah there were errors.. But as I read it.. I didn't even see them!! It was so engrossing and you've ...

hi.. Well as you must have read reviewers before me have already pointed most of the errors I noticed.. So I'll go on with the positive.. It was short, sweet, ...

Hi.. You know this was one of the funniest piece's I've read so far.. The rhyme was superb and the flow was smooth at most parts.. must say it's a ...

hi.. so I found the way you've described the emotions and everything pretty good and engaging.. at first I found it a bit weird but as I read on My ...

Well I like this just as much as I liked the previous parts.. or more.. Or Much much more!! This is way better than one could have expected from the ...