harshita3chaarag

Hey everyone!!! Thanks for making the effort of reading it... This one's sort of sad-sad but that's how its supposed to come out. Reviews are welcome... Critics too...:) And even ...

hmmmm..... gimme some time to think... Okay, I would totally agree with Tommybear in saying that it is different and less compared to your other works... But yes if you ...

hey again... Firstly I would like to tell you that I have started loving your poetry.... Brilliant and deep felt... The only thing which I feel needed improvement was: And ...

hey there... First of all... I think the story itself was good... But There are so many correct them... thein has mentioned them... Your descriptions were extremely weak though the ...

Hey... Your story was short and sweet... But some improvements are required... There should have been a little background of their feelings and probably a bit more description... Otherwise I ...

thanks for the review guys... :D And a million other thanks to the critics... I will work on it to edit and post it again... Thanks!!! Harshita...

Hi, Hi, Hi!!! This is a poem I wrote when I was moving from my old house to a new one which approximately 2000miles from my old house... Army life ...

Hey there... This is really sweet story... Something people end up loving :) You know him, I’m sure you do, or someone a lot like him. He’s that guy whose ...

hey there... Your poem was what I call 'short and sweet'. The only thing is that you need to divide it into paragraphs...that would have made it smoother and there ...

hey there!! Welcome to YWS!!! The theme of your poem is very nice... The flow of it was smooth and perfect... What I loved about your poem was that as ...

Hey there!!! Welcome to YWS!!! I liked your poem very much... I could feel the love radiating from the poem as I read it... It was very nicely written and ...

W-O-W!!! Gosh I love your poem!!! Maybe because I'm a crack pot for love and tragedy...!!!:p But that doesn't change the beauty of your poem... The depth of emotion from ...

Okay... I gotta a lot to say to you, yeah I gotta lot to say. I noticed your poem was absolutely brilliant( I saw you're a Paramore fan too(Your signature)). ...

well well.... Your poems are just brilliant!!!:) I literally love reading them...!! And now I see that short poems are your kind..Nice kinds. This was also a good piece. And ...

Hey again!! I liked this piece a lot too!!!:) The scenes you have created are very nice and I like how the poem has ended. The explanation you have given ...