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Re: Too Ugly
Hi... I read your poem and loved it instantly... I, a coward, Ran from you. Because you’re too beautiful for me. And I am too ugly inside from what I ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Cannot Forget
wow!!! It was such a deep and nice poem... You've done the description so good that I could imagine myself in that place.. It was really nice and particularly the ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: I've Got the Coffee Blues
hi... I really like your poem..!! its very nice indeed..!!! fun reading!!!
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: When I Should Be Paying Attention
hey and welcome!!! If I decide to ignore the rhyme troubles...I guess its a really good poem..Something that everyone can simply relate to... Your poem is about something everyone does ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: That Sacred Slut
hi... Your poem was very deep and intense...But good also... I liked it and the details you have added made it a better experience... Darkness was good and nice and ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Madness
wow!! this was a really nice piece of work... I don't think anything was wrong at all... Love it!!! :D
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
hey... Just want to tell you...that it was really nice and I think without all those 'smart words' it was really good... the flow was so smooth and relaxing and ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
Hi... God I've seriously become addicted to your works... Its so brilliant and deep...!!! And this one was specifically good.. The flow was smooth and gentle and so was the ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Perseverance Never Lies
Hi... God I've seriously become addicted to your works... Its so brilliant and deep...!!! And this one was specifically good.. The flow was smooth and gentle and so was the ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: all these tangled thorns
well... You've done very good with the imagery.. And it was very deep felt but I got a bit confused regarding the inspiration for writing this poem...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
Hi!! this was really great and brilliant..!!! Loved it... Never thought Death could also hate things!!:p
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Innocent Childhood...
This one comes from the changes I have suffered since I 'Grew Up' or I'd rather say, since I saw the real world... Hurtful and cruel real world... Please help ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Seperation
I beg you to review because it needs to be perfect as it has to go a long way and I know it must be terrible... Please please please review ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: If You Only Knew My Name
hey Matt, This poem was really brilliant!!!:) And the idea of a letter to yourself was what made it exceptionally good... And the emotion is so deep and clear that ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Keep faith
thanks for reviewing guys!!!:) I really appreciate the help and honestly this is one of my oldest poems thats why so much emphasis on the rhyme... I stopped writing with ...
Mar 11, 2011
