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Harshita Chaarag

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Too Ugly

    Hi... I read your poem and loved it instantly... I, a coward, Ran from you. Because you’re too beautiful for me. And I am too ugly inside from what I ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cannot Forget

    wow!!! It was such a deep and nice poem... You've done the description so good that I could imagine myself in that place.. It was really nice and particularly the ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I've Got the Coffee Blues

    hi... I really like your poem..!! its very nice indeed..!!! fun reading!!!

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: When I Should Be Paying Attention

    hey and welcome!!! If I decide to ignore the rhyme troubles...I guess its a really good poem..Something that everyone can simply relate to... Your poem is about something everyone does ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: That Sacred Slut

    hi... Your poem was very deep and intense...But good also... I liked it and the details you have added made it a better experience... Darkness was good and nice and ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Madness

    wow!! this was a really nice piece of work... I don't think anything was wrong at all... Love it!!! :D

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence

    hey... Just want to tell you...that it was really nice and I think without all those 'smart words' it was really good... the flow was so smooth and relaxing and ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perseverance Never Lies

    Hi... God I've seriously become addicted to your works... Its so brilliant and deep...!!! And this one was specifically good.. The flow was smooth and gentle and so was the ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perseverance Never Lies

    Hi... God I've seriously become addicted to your works... Its so brilliant and deep...!!! And this one was specifically good.. The flow was smooth and gentle and so was the ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: all these tangled thorns

    well... You've done very good with the imagery.. And it was very deep felt but I got a bit confused regarding the inspiration for writing this poem...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    Hi!! this was really great and brilliant..!!! Loved it... Never thought Death could also hate things!!:p

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Innocent Childhood...

    This one comes from the changes I have suffered since I 'Grew Up' or I'd rather say, since I saw the real world... Hurtful and cruel real world... Please help ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Seperation

    I beg you to review because it needs to be perfect as it has to go a long way and I know it must be terrible... Please please please review ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If You Only Knew My Name

    hey Matt, This poem was really brilliant!!!:) And the idea of a letter to yourself was what made it exceptionally good... And the emotion is so deep and clear that ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Keep faith

    thanks for reviewing guys!!!:) I really appreciate the help and honestly this is one of my oldest poems thats why so much emphasis on the rhyme... I stopped writing with ...

    Mar 11, 2011


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