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Re: Speaking Of It...
This is my first successful attempt at writing short stories.. Please review and help me perfect it... Speaking of it I knew that only 2 minutes were left before I ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: What You Meant To Her
Hey!! So this poem has been written by the combined effort of me and Lava ( though she has contributed more). This is for the Poetry pair competition and the ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
hey... It was so good!!! I instantly loved it... just beyond brilliant to me... the deapth of emotion had me lost in it... a very very good job...!!:D
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Secret Life of Superheroes
hey... It was such a funny and good poem that I just couldn't find anything wrong... very well written:)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: If I Fall....
hi.. Nice poem.. very good indeed. maybe the lines should have been a bit shorter. That's all... Good work:)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Moody Days That End in Y (Poetry Pair Contest)
hey... first of all, Best of luck for the competition... I'm also taking part with Lava... Now for the poem.. Firstly-awesome!!! it was brilliant and so funny that i tears ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Family First
hi.. I will again say, Like the other reviewers have, It was a good piece but needs a lot of improvement... Probably telling who exactly she is would have been ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: My guardian angel
hi... your poem is really very beautiful.. except for that little spelling error Amberla93 has mentioned, it was very good piece... good job:)
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: deleted
hey there... I read it and loved it.. you've written on something that's true and real.. I've read one more poem like that on YWS... Both of your poems were ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Small to Me.
hi... Yours is a very nice poem... The rhyme scheme was good and topic was good too... the flow was really smooth and I really couldn't detect any flaw... So ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Please Stay
hey... I really loved your poem... The only thing I felt was that the repetition you have done. I know it was to emphasis but I think you don't need ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Barriers
hey... I saw it and title seemed interesting so I decided to see... but made up my mind to review after I read it because its something very true... There ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Love
hey... I just read your poem i will say one thing... You made mistakes at a couple of places as the reviewer before me has pointed out... But I still ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Do you know her?
Hey...!! I'm really grateful to every one for the help. Thank you so very much... We'll work together on it and honestly Lava has done the most of it... I'm ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: ..
Hey!! I just read your poem and found it very nice... The depth had me captured and made it a good thing... Good job!!:)
Mar 26, 2011