happybear

That was so amazing! I couldn't find anything to be mean about! It so sweet and yet still Harry Potter-ish GREAT job

I did not see any where were it said if what we post is safe. Did I just over look this? I really want to post my future book on ...

Wow thankyou guys so much! I went back and fixed it all!

Thank you for posting!

Thank you so much pawprint! That comment really brightened my day!

Chapter 3 A beautiful sound filled the darkness. A melodious tune unlike any Ivy had ever heard. But it didn’t fit. She had swooned only a few hours ago and ...

The male and female really threw me off... but I know that was simply to avoid spoiling so I'll try to look over it =) 1. The choppy, short sentence ...

Chapter 1 Ivy Henderson rested behind an old pine desk that sat kitty-corner to an electric piano. The wood floor was stained with years of rolling her chair from the ...

The Tears of the Dead A wail sounded in the usually quiet neighborhood. Within the dark house, someone flicked on a lamp. "Hush, baby, hush," A gentle voice cooed in ...

Ballroomdancer95 (I like the name by the way) Awesome work! The smiles to me are a bit disconcerting but that's just me, don't change it unless everyone else things so. ...

OK... I have trashed the old version :D and made what you see now, enjoy! The happiest bear you ever did see! ________________________________________________________________________

Chapter 3 Hannah moaned. A fuzzy haze clouded her mind. Her thinking was slow, but some how she struck sluggishly on the opinion that something wasn’t right. She tried with ...

wow! I know Im supposed to be criticing but I was so caught up in the story i forgot to look for mistakes! Perhaps I'll just have to read it ...

*Chapter 2* Hannah and her mother quietly piled into the car. Neither mother nor daughter knew what to say. So many thoughts floated around Hannah's head. Most were terrifying thoughts ...

I'm not really the one to review this because this story isn't really 'my type' But I will say despite my tendency to stray from this sort of thing you ...