happybear

amazing!!! Thank you so much for posting this!

AGH this is driving me insane! The more I flesh it out the more boring it seems! What do I do!?

I too gave your piece a star!! Wow I could defenitly see the whole thing happening! I really loved it! It was a really good break from all the very ...

Ooooh! Yes I like it! The last line is very good it really cuts your poem cleanly off leaving your audience wonderfully on the edge of your seat, like a ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA that is amazing my friend!!! There really isn’t much to be said! (What the rest of the reviewers prove me wrong) I can totally see this happening! The rhymes ...

Well Well Well first off I can see that you are WAY better at ranting then I am! And Secondly this is full of painful and explozive emotions! Thirdly I ...

Ooh this has good rhythm! And great rhyme! (Especially for its length! good job) Your poem was deep and that was great! There were some parts that didn’t flow and ...

woa! this is astounding! it's powerful and really gets the message across! good job on that! Im not really the type of person for these kinds of poems... nervertheless I ...

hmmmm.... what to say. . . I’m not going to go into religion (I say this with great difficulty) and it was very short so there isn’t really a lot ...

Don’t call me. I won’t answer. No! Hang up! Walk away! We’re through! You’ve destroyed my heart completely! I slink away defeated. Don’t call me! I won’t answer! My love ...

Whoa! This is powerful! I don’t know, maybe its just me! But I thought the message for one was grand, and the writing was superb! Yet, it annoyed me that ...

I cant believe you were actualy able to write about this! If you just know alot about it and able to put all that in writing it's spectacular! but if ...

To those it may concern: This is a religious poem please don’t let that be your basis for your critique ------------------------------------------- A Love I Always Had Me My eyes cry ...

i fear I'm simply restated what Leja said, but the details you've added have taken the poeticness (I know that is not a word) from it. I know it's VERY ...

GREAT! your similes were astounding but you might have pushed them too far. Try to revolve around your main point at all times. It seems to me as if you ...