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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Ode to My School

    Haha you're great a rhyming! :) but (even though I do kinda have bad vision) is there any way you can make your lives a bit shorter but it could ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Horrendous Rock Concert

    I'm SO sorry you had to deal with that! Lol, I personally love rock and metal and that stuff but I would've never held my temper like you did XD. ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unforgettable Moment

    You need to work on your punctuation, like really bad :). Also, I don't understand what's happening very well, maybe it's just me but you're very descriptive. Work on your ...

    Apr 24, 2011


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