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Hey Tay! Best cousin ever :) anyway, a lot of times, people on this website use the enter key for dialog so it won't seem so clogged up. Also, the ...

Pool Shark Playing with Fire Chapt. 1 Go. To. Hell, Caleb!” Miranda screamed and stormed out of the bar. Caleb raised his eyebrows briefly before bursting into sick laughter. The ...

It's okay, I don't get the title but maybe that's just me. I liked your good vocabulary; however, the words didn't really make sense to me. I don't understand this ...

I really enjoyed this! I found not at all one flaw (only because I was concentrating on the story). It's very good and I thought it was extremely descriptive! It ...

I absolutely adored this!! It feels amazing to know that one person is out there for all of us. I think it's a habit for girls to think they're not ...

My bad, it wouldn't be either.

Sanity You took my wine, A sacrifice to pain. Untainted whispers And regret your promises. Cut away Everything that makes me. Go for the deep end; A lifeless maze, Sink ...

I like it! :) However, take out some of the words such as yet and now because it messes up the rhyming... Other than that it was pretty good :).

I like it! It is unique and beautiful :) I usually do not prefer happy and flowery poetry but this poem made me smile. :) Great job! Thank you! Good ...

Hey! I'm here to review. To tell you the truth I thought it was way to short and unorganized. I became kind of bored also. You need to describe what ...

Feathers of a Raven A demon within his soul, Masked by black feathers, Dark eyes search the world, Looking for his butterfly, The remains of his sweet love, Scattered on ...

Gooooood gracious! Lol you have a bunch of spelling errors and punctuation! Hehehe :), other than that I think you should have made this a novel because I kind of ...

It's alright :) kind of dull but has a good meaning to it. Try to open up more and be more descriptive. Use unusual words and phrases! :) Also, you ...

Drained Chapt. 5 My stomach is sickeningly tight as I finish scratching down about the amulet in my dream journal. I finish my final work and drop it down on ...

Check the first stanza you got kinda of an error lol. Other than that, good! :)