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Nice! I loved your description and wording. It was a bit confusing at first but now I sort of understand what it is. I really liked this! :)

This is great! This is exactly how I feel when I can get NO ideas! :D AWESOME AS ALWAYS! :D

Not As They Seem Chapt. 5 In many books or movies, after something very dramatic occurs, you expect the main character (which is me), to have some strange seductive dream ...

Hello! I'm here to review! First, the beginning is......not the best. In many stories, people don't directly talk to the reader unless it's a journal. I think the story would ...

Hello! :D I'm here to review. It was an alright poem, but I got some advice for you! First, the stanzas don't have the same length of lines. It kind ...

I think the second cover is the best! The first kind of makes it seem way to far back in history and I don't know about the story, but I ...

The Hunter's Night The Lover's Loss I am no angel I am not damned I am cursed With a broken heart Shattered in pieces Made of decay and talons I’ll ...

This is extremely good! All I can say is make a couple stanzas, space it out a bit because the lines are clumped together. I really like this! :D

I actually really like this. One of my favorite movies is Ariel and that's how this interested me. Many people make mermaids look kind of "little kiddy", meaning kind of ...

This sounds more like a song to me than a poem. I like your description but like I said, it's like a song. You repeat many of the words in ...

Not As They Seem Chapt. 4 My scream echoed throughout the house as Cookie lunged at me. Luckily, my survival instincts kicked in and I dashed back into my bedroom ...

Aww that's a very pretty flower! :D I bet you live in a great place! Lucky >.

Aww that's cute. Personally, I do have freckles and if someone wrote this to me, I'd be flattered. Good job! :D

Not As They Seem Chapt. 3 "Damnit, Robin! I hate your crappy old door! You seriously need to get this fixed,” a voice snapped. I heard his footsteps as he ...

It was kind of boring to tell you the truth but that's just me. It was very dull from description and Mitchie is very......plain. Also, is that her real name? ...