halogirl4197

You need to work on your punctuation, like really bad :). Also, I don't understand what's happening very well, maybe it's just me but you're very descriptive. Work on your ...

Writers block is awful!! And its hard for people to understand it because their not writers or poets....the poem is great!! :)

I like it :) all of the words are true!

I loved it! You're a great poet :) Keep writing.

You don't establish clearly what is occurring. You need explain in more detail who you are and what's going on. Thank you.