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Puppet Strings Bend and twist As you try and break My puppet strings Tied to the fake happiness You will not corrupt me I will shut out the world Leave ...

This is cute! :D I think this is very creative and really cool!

I LOVE that musical! The singing was amazing and I loved the idea about how the witch wasn't REALLY a bad person! It just blew me away! XD

At first (in my opinion), I thought it was going to be a happy and exciting poem about how some kid got hurt and enjoyed getting patched up. Now I ...

I really liked this poem. I personally do NOT stereotype and/or criticize people for how they look or act in public. Many teens who wear a bunch of make up ...

It's an alright poem. I adored your description and flow but it was very short. Maybe, describe why he/she loves him/her. Not just their looks. MAKE IT LONGA! :D

Living in Sorrow I am ready when you are To meet you, that is To tell you I love you And thank you for saving me You’re so beautiful Deadly ...

Hi! I'm here to review! :D It's an okay poem. You should be more creative with your rhyming and branch out to different words. It doesn't need to end the ...

Hi! :D I'm here to review! It's very confusing up until the last paragraph. It was like babbling about something but I had no idea what at first. The part ...

Not as They Seem Chapt. 6 I scanned over the documents with wide, bugged eyes. My heart was pounding the whole time as reality slowly began to hit me. I ...

Pretty cool! It's quite a short song O.O but I think it's good. The chorus has an okay rhythm but could be better :). Other then that, good rhyming and ...

It's alright. It seems more like children's poem :D which is good! Fix the first stanza. It's A A A A and the rest is A A B B. Other ...

I think it's cute! :D I like frogs lol, but the picture is quite small. I want to read the words also! Please resize it and notify me! :D

Brilliant Look passed my eyes And search through my soul A scar you will see That will not make me bow I will not shatter For I am strong To ...

I really enjoyed this :D. At first when I saw it, I was like "ugh, a long poem but then I started to get into it and read :D. Lol. ...