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This was amazing. I personally have no knitpicks about it. It was so raw, and I love the part about sitting on the bedroom floor. You put so much emotion ...

Cara! My love! This is just as magnificent as when I read it the first time. (personally, I fell honored that I was the first of all these people to ...

ALYSOUN! I must say, I love this story! You didn't tell me you were writing more! Anyways, I'm gonna critque. 1. I don't like the fact that Tom dies. He's ...

I really liked your story! You could've told us some of the things that were left out, like what he said to his mother the night before, though. It would ...

Cara, my darling, I love it. I should infrom everyone that this was simply for a school project and she turned it into much more than expected! I loved hearing ...