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This was amazing. I personally have no knitpicks about it. It was so raw, and I love the part about sitting on the bedroom floor. You put so much emotion ...

Cara! My love! This is just as magnificent as when I read it the first time. (personally, I fell honored that I was the first of all these people to ...

ALYSOUN! I must say, I love this story! You didn't tell me you were writing more! Anyways, I'm gonna critque. 1. I don't like the fact that Tom dies. He's ...

Alysoun Martha! This is the story that I read at your house that I love so much(:(: Good work girl, I'm glad to see you're finally on here. K, enough ...

I really liked your story! You could've told us some of the things that were left out, like what he said to his mother the night before, though. It would ...

She basically saying ya know, everyone's seen em now, no need to cover em. &Thanks(:

He finally remembers her name! hahahahaha. That one was amazing as well as the first. Like i saad in my last post, YOU MUST DO MORE!

Hahaha, I'm an original Twilighter (before all this craze) And I must say, that had me in stiches. As soon as my friend comes over I'm making her read it ...

I agree with them ^^ Your rythm was slightly choppy, and the word choice was a little off, but it was very descriptive, and you really got your feelings across. ...

Dear, you should cover your arms, your pain is showing. The scars are exposed to all and the crowd is growing. Darling, why must you cry? They all warned that ...

Cara, my darling, I love it. I should infrom everyone that this was simply for a school project and she turned it into much more than expected! I loved hearing ...

You are sooo talented! Please tell me you are doing something along the lines of art class or somewhere you can be put out there with this? One thing, I'm ...

This is really, really good. But I'm not quite sure I get what it means. Your writing style is amazing. I'm going to read more of your work now!

I'm re-reading the Black Dagger Brotherhood series by J.R Ward(: The 7th comes out on Tueday and I can't wait! Also, I just finished Glass by Ellen Hopkins....All of her ...

A voice carries with the wind, A soul dances in the rain, A girl hurts on the outside To rid the inside pain. Three short words spoken By two fragile ...