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Thanks Yazi for the helpful review! I actually had a sudden urge to write this after having the weirdest dream the night before... Like you mentioned, the title is what ...

Oh yah I might not do the editing until a little later ! sorry!!!! Im kinda busy with writing the next I'm planning on correcting it this week, but not ...

O_O...wow lol anyway thanks everyone for all your advice! i did kind of confuse myself on their relationship. They did get more serious. I just wanted to show the mature ...

^__________________^ thank you lin!

It's supposed to be a dream but I didnt want to make it cheesy and plain. Like all stories say things like "She woke up , gasping for air" it ...

Well I'm going to leave the pasta there anyway^^. Oh and I made some corrections. Some I just left because I thought they were minor. I changed the ending also ...

O_o okay... well it is very overwhelming on the corrections. Sorry about all those mistakes^^. I kinda rushed :P Oh and the time period is 1932 or 1935, haven't really ...

....I'm a bit overwhelmed by all the corrections, but I will try to correct most of them. Thanks so much for spending the time to read my writing and editing ...

I really enjoyed reading it. I think you have great talent in writing and I hope I get to read all of your stories, Thanks for putting this on. love ...