hae-won

O-o okay..well practically everything i was going to edit was already said, so I'm going to skip that part^^ Well I loved that cute little relationship you had going on ...

I really enjoyed it! It's amazing the way you explained everything so thoroughly from your character's viewpoints. you somehow took all the five senses and used them to create a ...

Looooooooooove it!!!!!!! yay u put in a part for the gay dude! hes my favorite! :P lol anyway it was hilarious at just the right parts as usual. I think ...

Oh yah I might not do the editing until a little later ! sorry!!!! Im kinda busy with writing the next I'm planning on correcting it this week, but not ...

Like olivia said there are some minor errors, but I don't think it really shows alot so it's your choice if you would like to look over it again.^^ Well ...

O_O...wow lol anyway thanks everyone for all your advice! i did kind of confuse myself on their relationship. They did get more serious. I just wanted to show the mature ...

^__________________^ thank you lin!

It's supposed to be a dream but I didnt want to make it cheesy and plain. Like all stories say things like "She woke up , gasping for air" it ...

This is only chapt. 2 and some of chapt.3 I'm still working on it enjoy^^ Chapt. 2 Hate and wounds ( a little short^^) It was pitch black, but then ...

It had a nice starting but how come it's so short? my apologies if it was insulting to you. I think you should have continued the story though, for I ...

I really liked it! It had some sort of rythym to it It was like drums beating at every stanza. The portraying the angel was very well done in my ...

i LOVE IT! sorry about the caps^^ lol well it was a wonderful story! Perfectly cute at all the right moments! You really had that flow going on of richard ...

O_________O i want the next chapter....its so good! i love it! i actually like the gay guy part, kinda sweet^^ lol well plz hurry and write it! i cant wait! ...

Well I'm going to leave the pasta there anyway^^. Oh and I made some corrections. Some I just left because I thought they were minor. I changed the ending also ...

O_o okay... well it is very overwhelming on the corrections. Sorry about all those mistakes^^. I kinda rushed :P Oh and the time period is 1932 or 1935, haven't really ...