gyrfalcon

:oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: um...wow. thank's so much, guys...wow. >added later< doesn't any one esle have something to say!

Oh no--Incan has struck again!!! Don't let him bother you, jack, it's his job to be a pain (rather, he volenteers for the position). go check out Snoink's poem about ...

Chapter Seven Spring melted into summer. The members of Unit Thirty-two learned both the arts of war and its history. In the classroom they were pumped full of propaganda about ...

hehe--short and sweet (and acurate)

Gyr wants more Chair! *batts eyes* pretty please!!!

*sighs* Ah, I love it when I finally integrate your guys' wonderful catches--everything looks so much better! :-) Thanks to all you fantastic people who have read Gypsie Eyes! The ...

Thanks to everyone!!! :-) Myth, Pros, your catches shall be integrated forthwith. Um, Pros, the reason he's not acting like he's 16 is because he is, in fact, NOT 16... ...

loverly poem, darling!

Chapter 6 The next day, near the end of their class with Jataal, the battle mage asked Tannar to stay after the hour was up. The Elemental waited suspiciously while ...

oy! Pros, you and Shafter keep giving me conflicting advice on the "comma before a quotation mark" thing! ;) Oh well, I'm sure it'll work out. Thanks so much, darling, ...

:-) Remember that I love you darling! *gives ice cream* And remember, take deep, cleansing breaths!

Claudette: your suggestions for Karenna's claustrophobia attack were wonderful!!! I went back and changed it--hope it's better, that scene's been bugging me for awhile Aero: darling, what would I do ...

:-) hehe...I'm so glad you guys like it! Myth, you're vonderful, dahling. Your eagle-eyed catches shall be integrated forthwith. :-) >added later< *sings* the catches have been integrated, the catches

Chapter 5 “Miss Morn.” Karenna stopped and turned around, holding her hands behind her to hide the napkin-wrapped leftovers she had pinched from lunch. Headmaster Tavrinal approached her across th

agian, thanks so much to everyone who took the time to crit my stuff! myth, as usual, you are your annoyingly eagle-eyed self ;-) I have saved your catches to ...