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Re: The Elements
the story is definatly a good sequal i think you could make a little longer :idea: and i think this is basicly is a great story :)
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: The Elements
dude that story was awesome the only thing i could find wrong with it was that you could describe the teens a little more WRITE A SECOND PART!!! :roll: :D
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: The Blade of Eternity
the story is good and i wish that you would talk more about Ahtos and i hope you make it longer :arrow: :wink:
Jan 17, 2008