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***this has been edited to sound better as lyrics verse one: I’m sitting in a plain white room, filled with all my favorite things Hard booze and lots of smoke ...

hey abby what type of poetry do you write? can't wait to see some of your work ~Bren~

cartoons went down the drain after 2000. all the good shows were on in the '90's.

Does anyone out there think I'm worth it? Would anyone listen to every little petty plea To every worry, every bit of self-condemning pity? These days I feel like curling ...

A note: this is not in any way true I’m sitting in a plain white room Filled with all my favorite things Hard booze and lots of smoke But even ...

this is interesting. i didn't really see anything wrong with it. yes, i know this sounds like a horrible reveiw, i apoligze, im not that good at it. happy writings, ...

hey kris this was a good poem. the grammar was correct and everything, and it used good language. the only thing you might want to fix is the title. It's ...

ello mate this definately qualifies as music. the only problem i really had was that in the beginning, you started out talking about classical music, but then move on to ...

I have seen a thousand days Go by without a whisper. Taken down from my stand, I find myself down for the count. The skies turn dark and the rain ...

for not being a poet, this sure was good. I have to agree with Forever Threnody, keep writing poetry. you never know, you could surprise yourself.

Always to see but never to feel, always to speak but never to hear. Your presence always brings fierce longing, yet to not be able to hold you, to kiss ...

i liked it=] the only problem i had was in the following stanza: And what would be there forever, to inspire us to leave our din, if the peace that ...

this was ok. It didnt really have any fluid thought didn't make sense throughout. You should try adding more detail and make the topic clearer. Broken light, dancing to the ...

ok so this is my first time posting photagraphy ever so....yeah

for a first attemt this really good, just a couple of things: Here’s another broken song, Here’s one more sigh for you. I’m thinkin’ life’s become more difficult Since the ...