guitargrl1323

apologizes for the bad lighting, it was a really old camera

i didn't think it was that bad. maybe try delving into the physiological reasons behind fashion and fads?

Memories flash through my head in a blur Hurt fills my broken heart Tears stream down my forlorn face Depression slowly wears my body down this stanza was more of ...

1.I killed one in kill Calli 2.Pop em up on the floor 3.I neva went to the valley 4.I just banged on his door 5.Yea it's the king muthafuckas know ...

its fine, just think a little deeper next time you read anything i write

~this has a very bad title, would love a new one~ your words echo in my mind and in my soul along with a life’s confusion it’s just one more ...

[1ST VERSE] There’s this dream, I don’t know if I’ll make it true All I know is how I want it so much I may no have backs to lay ...

hey, welcome to YYS!!! just for you to know, you need to comment on two pieces before you post your own writing. now, to the story... i liked it, although ...

Death begins a new dawn It starts with a light In a never-ending tunnel And creates an exciting journey Life begins a new dusk For in the beginning There may ...

The confusion is taking me but I don’t know why I keep trying but you keep pushing me away What the hell is wrong with you Can’t you see what ...

this is good. i couldn't read anything wrong with it, but for a song it might be a little too long. I got the feeling that it would go to ...

hey, ok so this is a really great poem, but im not quite sure it would work too well as lyrics. the entire i was reading it, i couldn't really ...

um no offence, but i don't really think this would make a good song. unless it has a lot of instrumental parts, the whole thing would probably take up to ...

jump on your bed while singing a song about joke, it will help you. good luck- bren

i don't know about stories, but if you want any funny poems try checking some of shel silverstein's books of poems. happy hunting- Bren