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Re: Engulfed In Sin
Hi. What sin is the person committing? this was unclear. i didn't personally like this poem as it was dark and a bit odd, but i thought it was quite ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Fairytale (Us And Them)
I really liked this poem, and thought that it was quite tastefully done. Its very sad, and I thought that perhaps the ending was a little too empty. You could ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Be Not My World
I really really loved this! I thougth it was amazing! I loved the bits like where gravity was 'a hug' and the flecks on the nails were 'clouds' and everything. ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Suicide
I really loved this poem. I thought it was very emotional, and that the slight unclarity (like with who the boy was talking to) was really good. It made me ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Extracts from a lame time traveler's journal - Part 2
Nature, regrettably, thought it best to furnish our buck with the agility of a senile tortoise I quite enjoyed this piece of writing and thought that the descriptions were very ...
Sep 15, 2011
