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  • Other Poetry Re: Engulfed In Sin

    Hi. What sin is the person committing? this was unclear. i didn't personally like this poem as it was dark and a bit odd, but i thought it was quite ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fairytale (Us And Them)

    I really liked this poem, and thought that it was quite tastefully done. Its very sad, and I thought that perhaps the ending was a little too empty. You could ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Be Not My World

    I really really loved this! I thougth it was amazing! I loved the bits like where gravity was 'a hug' and the flecks on the nails were 'clouds' and everything. ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Suicide

    I really loved this poem. I thought it was very emotional, and that the slight unclarity (like with who the boy was talking to) was really good. It made me ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Extracts from a lame time traveler's journal - Part 2

    Nature, regrettably, thought it best to furnish our buck with the agility of a senile tortoise I quite enjoyed this piece of writing and thought that the descriptions were very ...

    Sep 15, 2011


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