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Re: Damsel in Distress
I really want to get involved in this! This is so cooooooooooooooool! I am too tired now though... can I do it at the weekend? Please save me a spot!
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Murder In Upper Tidley!
Upper Tidley is a small, sleepy village where everyone knows everyone and nothing much ever happens but anything that does is gossiped about LOADS! There’s a pub, a village shop/post-office, ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Abortions
I'd just like to add about eight-year-old's becoming pregnant and the baby killing them that if you are capable of having a baby, your body is most often ready to ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Abortions
I would never get an abortion, whatever the circumstances. I am going to argue why, in all circumstances, abortion is wrong. I would not get an abortion because I believe ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Wherever You Will Go, I Will Go
Hello, I really like the story of Ruth and thought that this was a good dramatisation of it, sticking to the story. I enjoyed reading it. However, there were some ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Gravedigger
Hello! I enjoyed reading this. The description was good, as was the idea. I think Leonardo's pretty cool, and thought it was quite interesting to do a story about the ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Lady Beatrix Academy For Young Gifted Ladies
Name: Amalie O'Dwyer Age: 16 Appearance: Quite small, slight and unobtrusive. She is pretty, however, and was as a human as well. She has short, softly bobbed dark brown hair ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Lady Beatrix Academy For Young Gifted Ladies
Name: Jack Age: 17 Family: Son of Lady Beatrix if allowed? If not, he can be the child of another member of the staff.He is a pupil at the boys ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Just Friends
I really enjoyed this piece of work. I wanted to know more about the narrator, and why she likes the boy and what her view on the girl is, but ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Prisoner
There is a novel with the same basis called 'The Boy In The Striped Pyjamas'. I don't know if you know of it or not, but I imagine you do. ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: empty space.
From the reviews this sounds really good! Sad I didn't get to see it... Good luck with the reconstructing!
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Although your gone, you still haunt me....
Firstly, grammar... Title: Although YOU'RE gone, you still haunt me... (3 dot dot dots works better) I think that what with the title saying he is gone, it would be ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Although your gone, you still haunt me....
Firstly, grammar... Title: Although YOU'RE gone, you still haunt me... (3 dot dot dots works better) I think that what with the title saying he is gone, it would be ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Love turned to hate
This is a lovely lovely beautiful poem. I don't really have any improvements to suggest. Cupid's bow has crossed it's 'limits' could possibly be a little different, the word limit ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Winter's love.
I thought this was a really good interesting poem. I especially enjoyed the bit about the star-shaped scar and the cars swerving apart. I thought that was a really interesting ...
Dec 16, 2011
