guineapiggirl

Hello Jyva!! I would appreciate any reviews of my poems. I think I can take some quite harsh criticism. This is I think the best of the crop so I'd ...

Hello! So after a long, LONG creative hiatus I have recently started trying to write poetry again during a few sleepless nights... I have uploaded a few poems this evening ...

Thank you so much for your help Carlito. Having mused it all over last night and then read your thoughts this morning, I think I may have a shot at ...

I'm writing a Fantasy novel. Well, when I say writing.... I had the idea about a year ago, and I've written perhaps 20,000 words in different drafts since then, plus ...

*reads "unsportsmanlike" comment* *feels a bit sheepish* *vaguely croaks about my dad's internet connection breaking for two hours* *feels dozens of eyes boring into me through the internet, filled wi

Hiya! I would love this short story to be reviewed :) I've been told to "add in setting" specifically, but anything else you think needs improving I'd love to hear!

Was reading the information in the storybook and it made me feel really guilty for drowning a Sim yesterday... :/ I wanted ghost babies, ok!

I absolutely love this idea! We have these kinds of debates at school, except that we allow floor members to ask questions after each side has done the first two ...

Thanks! Great review. Lots of really useful advice, and you didn't kill my piece like you warned! I'll definitely be requesting another review once the next chapter's up! The name ...

Hi! Could you have a look at this? It's the first chapter of this big epic (in my head) fantasy thing I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it, but if ...

Hi! Would you have a look at this? It's the first chapter of this big epic (in my head!) fantasy thing I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it, but if ...

A few things that have recently happened to me to do with the culture of discouraging girls from maths and science: In my maths class, in the run-up to the ...

If you'd like to review this I'd be most grateful :)

Hello! I'd love it if you could look at my story :) I'm afraid I don't know how to attach a picture of soup...

The Hobbit: The Desolation of Smaug. End of.