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I like this quite a bit. Sorry but I don't have anything else to say, I'm impressed. But uh, why do those two hate her? You should explain that, at ...

I'm impressed. Please PM me when the next part comes out!

Hey everyone! As in my last parts, I really would aprecciate feedback. Please read my previous parts before reading this, it will save you a lot of confusion. Chapter 3 ...

Hey! I absolutely LOVE this story. I read all of the chapters and honestly, I can't think of much to say. Except, as many people have already said, the image ...

wow, I like this quite a bit. But I will have to agree with what doodle said. I think, all in all, that it's impressive.

Wow, this is interesting. Pretty imaginative as well. I think you should describe the wings that Kire has a little better. Are they feathered, scaly, or something else? How big ...

This is really amazing! I read all of the parts and I must say, I'm very impressed.

This is part two of the story that I am writing. Again, criticism and advice are appreciated. Chapter 2 Golni Erik walked away from the house that until a few ...

Thank you, I'll edit that now.

Wow, this is really awesome! Very imaginative, original, and well-written I think. The only thing that I saw that should be fixed was a spelling error. "breech' is actually 'breach'. ...

Hey, this is the first time I've showed anybody my stories other than my friends. I haven't got a name for it yet. I shortened it as someone recommended, so ...

I personally like Rayna, as it seems pretty unique to me. But it's your character, so it's your choice.