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dang this is awesome! Please PLEASE PM me when the next part comes out.

I can't see the comics! :(

dude, this thing is AWESOME! PM me when the next part comes out please. I loved the end, very dramatic.

Man I love this. I can't find anything wrong with it as far as I can tell. Please PM me when the next part is published.

I personally think that you can draw like, a million times better than I can, but I would suggest shading it.

You should lengthen it, but I agree completely with it. Trust me, I know.

hmm, interesting. I don't really understand what this poem is trying to say, but I still like it.

O.O cheese.........I LOVE IT! Cheese is like, awesome. And so is this poem.

I like this, this is good.

LOL! Cinderblock...... xDDDDDDDDDDD Nice.

I like it. Other than the things that the people above me posted, I can't find anything bad about it.

O.O I love LOLcats......xD

Woah! This is your first try at photography? You're talented!

Thank you, I fixed what I could. If you want to know more about Erik please read my other chapters, they will explain everything.

Hey, this is the fourth chapter of my story. please read the last chapters before you read this one. It will save you a lot of confusion. As usual, feedback ...