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looks promising, should be able to use it (unless its complicated and my simple mind can figure it out ;) ) thanks for sharing it :D

tanks for teh review it is the beggining by the way from all what ppl have said i know i need to do some serious editing on the prologue i ...

alright, thanks for the chance to explain alot of the points people are getting confused over 1. It is hot; he feels it through his hardened skin, through to his ...

Sol is a godd ess ; female chapter 1 is already is already posted, its in my portfolio if you wanna read it (its under "The Oath" folder) im working ...

thanks everyone! ill start edting it today and when im finished ill update both the prologue and chap 1 looking forward to anything anyone might have to say :D -Grimy

Well, it wasn't the worst begining to a series I've ever read. it isn't the start; the prologue is, go to my profile thing by clicking on portfolio next to ...

In the not so far off distance, he could see a shimmer. He attempted to steer himself away but his curious side had very different ideas. And so he walked, ...

disturbing yet intriguing the silver substance, is it oil? or some other substance? maybe some more description on his surroundings and the hole would be nice, and a name other ...

depends what part of the world you come from mainly i spell it defence (usually) ... bob... ... of course!... how could i be so dumb?... BOB!!! woop...

ok, first of all, great story, reminds me of the way i sometimes write second, this is for all the people who suggested the changes (the term has eluded me...) ...

Welcome Grace, im not religious but im sure you will find someone who will co-author with you ive only been a member for a few hours and already this site ...

please leave any comments and/or suggestions on improvement thanks in advance :) Update: alright ive updated it so its in harmony with my version (finally :D) ive added quite a ...

thanks max ive been writing fantasy since i started writing, which hasn't been very long, few months at most, started writing and couldn't stop. never realised just how addictive writing ...

Robert wasn’t sure about what he should say just looked at his wife. needs a comma here: Robert wasn’t sure about what he should say, just looked at his wife. ...

amazing story! beutifully put together His breath steamed in the air and he shivered, holding his thin legs close to his body. possibly replace and with as i wont put ...