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the thing that makes this poem so strone is that its true, and yet so little number of people actually try to help the situation with poverty etc. poems like ...

Try to stay away from cliches like time rushing by. I don't think there is any need for blatant lines like "what has happened to humanity?" By writing this poem ...

awsome haiku's a funny A+ 4 U! my friend lol if laughter is the best medicine i bet none of your friends are ever sad lol nice creativity

wow, that's a good one... you've got good talent, plz dont be discouraged by my comments :wink: oh yeh, here at YWS we have this rule about how many reviews ...

I made this to try lift the spirits of my gf, she felt a bit depressed so i wrote this Those blue eyes, those beautiful eyes, they swallow my gaze. ...

something i wrote at a writers workshop... please try not to be harsh, it was rushed The rustle of pen and paper, Stranger's ideas coming into creation. This is fiction, ...

wow, cool story like the way you explain things, not exactly telling but hinting im not gonna make a critique at the moment, too busy other than a few typos ...

i kinda am, and if it weren't for procrastination and HOMEWORK! i would probably aready posted chap 2, and possibly chap 3 its about different things, if you can understand ...

what???? only 3 votes for shooting? :( i dont know why i like it, just interests me as a sport is archery included in that? cause its fun to watch ...

good read, although i noticed some things that could use improving plz dont take this the wrong way, just trying to help Mrs. Mapletree didn't like late people like the ...

hey shay awsome story, don't think i ever got a chance to say that at school as the others have said, you have talent, i hope you keep using it ...

wow, that's really good what you've suggested, thanks. do you mind if i use it? if you do just pm me and i wont use it in my next update ...

which told him in no uncertain terms that his body weight was far more then the old beams could handle I first thought this sounded kinda wierd, "in no uncertain ...

“A women was murdered in the marketplace, I was nearby so they decided to blame me.” He grunted. women is the plural, so (unless you mean a two or more ...

depends, i just started work a while ago so i can afford it, and i do want to help YWS but before i paid id probably have to hook up ...