grimy89098

thanks for the review, you've pointed out alot of what i know needs fixing already, but alot of it is new to me im pretty sure lackwit is more of ...

its unfinished but i figured i might post what ive already got, hope you like it. ill post what i write when i can ProjeKt Oath chap 2 Sulos reflected ...

very nice, loved this one. just a few things ill point out: My heart flutters with the beat of one hundred drums. try loosen up the words a bit, try ...

10/10 laughed my head off when i saw it

um, which one? 7/10 for the first one and 5/10 for the second one

i liked it, bit confusing at times, but that might just be my simple mind... ;) the vocab perhaps could using some fleshing out, but its good how it is ...

um, i forgot what eloping means so i cant give you a good review but i liked it anyway, the ending was good, nearly laughed and i love the whole ...

well i wrote this a few days ago, and as usual ive been to lazy to edit it any further than what i have. ill prob end up givin it ...

wow nice poem as angel of death said its pretty much flawless, really cool poem what shows out is that its so true -grimy

:D awsome poem keep writing cause thats really good, A+ 4 u! can't wait to see more stuff from you -grimy

ok galerius, when i said "All expressed for only chosen eyes." i didnt mean for it to come across as arrogant, i meant that what ppl write they show only ...

cool poem, even though im not religious and this poem has quite a bit of religious links, i liked most of it the vocab you use is cool, and how ...

for a terrible prompt that was pretty good! nicely done A+ 4 U! -Grimy

thanks everyone :D

cool, love the creepy vibe though really disturbing.... 0_o cool pic btw