grimy89098

A fake ‘Would you lie for me?’ I never asked that question Now I’m told you did anyway But I never wanted to live a lie Used, cast aside I’m ...

here's what i did to it: These strong walls, They hold all my fury, Against those pitiful people all around you. On the news, Being praised for wasting time and ...

hey, thanks for the reviews so sorry it took me so long to show up again, have been rather busy these last few months. the poem can be about a ...

very nice job editing :D liked the poem alot, has alot of meaning and feeling behind it in the rewrite you addressed its problems very well... and now i don't ...

nice story, though a few things didn't make sense to me, i won't go into detail or give a proper critique at the moment, though i hope to be able ...

awsome :D liked how you put it together, though like they said before it could use more description. but im not sure if the colors are what need more description. ...

i hav to agree with the message of it. maybe its just my school... but the new principal this year is taking our freedom of speech and freedom to wear ...

ahh, my favourite subject... Seems like just about every other day she's breaking down nowhere to be found pushed up against the wall slowly losing it all she wonder's what ...

hope u like it :D These strong walls, They hold my fury, Against those pitiful people. They speak, You hear. They scorn, I cringe. Yet these walls will not hold. ...

nice, keep up the good work! :D -grimy

tell him to WRITE!!! thats really cool and if he says no hit him ova the head! if he doesn't keep writing and lets his writing go it'll be a ...

nice! high five! no? ok then (: liked this one, very nice. A+ 4 u! perhaps more feeling in the voice (last minute edit: sry, just saw the review above ...

nice (: ... yes, that's all im gonna say .. because everyone has said stuff i wanted to... ... darn... -grimy Please don't swear unless it's in a literary work! ...

and crouched in a defensive position i know you didnt want detailed critiques but i just wanted to point this out try: "and crouched defensively" sorry, couldn't help myself, thought ...

none of the above, we have wireless that connects to the 3G mobile network here in Australia bit unreliable if the network is down (which sometimes happens) but its cool ...