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:D awesome story, you've got me hooked now what an evil ring... anyways, will be interesting to see what happens to Mariadelle, now that she's free to run away its ...

ooh... me likey... Anyways, back to reality. As the others have said, it lacks any sort of indication about the story, or your character. All we've been told is there's ...

and here i was trying not to think about it... i can relate to this too well very well done, you draw the reader in and show them what your ...

thanks everyone :D hopefully ill get the time to edit it a bit, once i get my homework done... (it could take a while :cry: )

um... hope you like it Liar, thief You lied, You never wanted me, You never loved me. Even while I fell, So confused, You wouldn’t give my heart back. Now ...

heya, you look like ur new... Welcome to YWS!!!... sorry i just had to say that, couldn't help myself very good poem, nice choice of words and interesting imagery im ...

heya! you've got a pretty good poem there, but it could probably use some improving but ScriboErgoSum beat me to it :( The stains on the carpet bleed color even ...

i liked it :D the parts before this one seemed a bit... i dunno... odd? but this chapter was interesting the characters can be confusing at times (jason came over ...

lol! thats got to be the most random thing ive ever read XD i do like the twilight series but you've got a few good points there thanks for the ...

Thanks :D

no reviews.. is it that bad? :cry:

ahhh... i love it :D Tables turned. Now it's me who fills the room with dusk. Now it’s you who comes to listen past glimmering in your eyes. You used ...

i was happy 30 seconds ago :( in other words, well done! :D awsome imagery too, can imagine it so easily its creepy (or maybe that's just me?) very powerful ...

wow, awsome poem as the others said, really good imagery couldn't stop reading, even though someone was in my doorway yelling XD anyways, gotta go (yelling getting louder) brilliant job, ...

looked at sticky and found out it probably shouldn't be in this category, sorry bout that feel free to move it anyone who has that power