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Nice work, just one thing I noticed wrong with this. The rhythm in the fourth and fifth stanzas don't really match the flow of the rest of the poem. I ...

Wow, where to begin. Well, it certainly is getting interesting. The love triangle is definately there like I had predicted. But, it was...well, long. Not that there is anything wrong ...

New characters, now I'm very intrigued. Sounds like there are about to be a lot of twists in this. Well, I'll say I don't really have much to critique, other ...

Well, not bad. But, there are a few spelling mistakes and missing little words in between sentences. It was a good second chapter. Also, just as a suggestion. I found ...

Well, chapter 1 was fun to read. Entertaining, interesting, and a tad insane. Also, there were a lot of missing little words and spelling mistakes, but this isn't an english ...

Other than forgetting to add in a few little words, such as: like, as, and the, I really have nothing else to critique about this. I found this to be ...

Yeah, this is pretty melodramatic, but it was beautifully written. I'm glad you decided to post this after all. I think the title for this was very appropriate. This seems ...

Wow, this sounds like something Edgar Allen Poe would write. I like it. It seems to me that this is a story of a murder, the murder of a significant ...

I took a lot from this. At first, it seems like a poem about the disappointing realities of lost innocence. Then, as I read, it seems like your typical tragic ...

Wow! Where to begin? This pretty much sums up the last eleven years since the beginning of millennium. It's like a history lesson, laced with angst and questions that have ...

This one speaks to everybody, that's what I like about it. Being "perfect" is an illusion that we try to achieve in life, but without failure there is no flavor ...

I think I like this just as much as I enjoyed reading Erased. No matter how many times I read this, there are just not enough words or ways in ...

I could never know the depths of you. But, I do know what it feels like to feel like you've been "erased". To feel like everything you once were suddenly ...