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Re: To the Fiend
Very simple to interpret. A little disturbing to read, but overall a very beautiful interpretation of self harm. I like how you did this in the third person, like sort ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Autumnal Night
I really like the imagery in this one. You paint a very vivid picture here.
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Profanity
I thought this was pretty funny. It was short, straight to the point, but had a very good message. Nice job.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: A Burdened Afterthought
Yes, I know the paragraphs give it more of a story forum than a poem. I've never felt comfortable writing in stanzas. Maybe I should start making that a habit ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: A Burdened Afterthought
It seemed only fair to let time heal pain-yet I see your face and it all comes back to me again. A severed tie that can never be restructured. You ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: Erased
I could never know the depths of you. But, I do know what it feels like to feel like you've been "erased". To feel like everything you once were suddenly ...
Feb 23, 2011
