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A still small voice came to me on a cold winters eve. Whether or not I imagined it, still remains to be seen. With an angels whisper and a demons ...

Don't know what to make of this one. I'm sensing mental anguish here. Like something feels wrong and you're not quite sure what it is. For the lack of information, ...

LOL! Cute. I hate peas myself. Taste just like death :)

Give away another memory. Remove another wound. Sadness withering away the joy that tries to bloom. I feel cold No one knows Empty feelings come and go Promises and broken ...

LOL! Sounds a lot like what I just posted. I see what you mean about imagery. Makes it a lot more interesting. Good Job!

When I'm laying and I'm praying and I'm thinking.... When I'm trying and I'm lying concentrating on dying. No excuses I was stupid. so confused and undecided. And I may ...

This seems like a poem about a love so strong that no tragedy can tare it apart. Sort of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet

This was creepy. I LOVE IT! Based on the narrative, I'm guessing it's suicide by Drain O'?

I'm actually thinking of changing the title. Yeah, you're right the title makes no sense for this poem. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Well, I was drunk when I wrote this, so that would explain alot. I was aiming for how sometimes happiness only comes in small doses. But, I can see how ...

What a wasted wreck of being this is. Transparent flesh and lifeless eyes. A temple in which the secrets are masked with bold-faced lies. A mind running rampant with scatterbrained ...

Man, this was good. Way to show the emotional shame of defacing dignity for brief pleasure. I also like the way you showed it from both the woman and the ...

I've decided to keep Samantha out of the "spotlight" if you will, only because when I wrote this story is mainly about what I was feeling and thinking at the ...

Have you ever done something so terrible to someone that no matter what, you can't let it go, even after they've forgiven you? Some say it is easier to forgive ...

I think I like this just as much as I enjoyed reading Erased. No matter how many times I read this, there are just not enough words or ways in ...