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Loved it, very haunting. Had a very eerie feeling to it. I felt as though I could relate in some way. Good job

Disclaimer: Another poem where the title doesn't quite fit the content, but it just might make sense. It's a metaphorical thing, you'll see. Remnants of what will never be again. ...

Wow! Where to begin? This pretty much sums up the last eleven years since the beginning of millennium. It's like a history lesson, laced with angst and questions that have ...

It kind of made sense upward, until the third stanza, or should I say second stanza? Oh well, it could use a bit more, but then again, it also works ...

I can totally relate on both ends. This was good. The flow was nice. I especially liked how it kind of went from calm to angry. Good job.

Loved the imagery in this. Very mysterious as always. Lots of dark description. Good job

Brutal honesty! It comes without asking. Every statement I've made- not retracting. No apologies for my lack of discretion. It's pathetic! The only reason you accept me is because I'm ...

Thank you all for the reviews. This poem was actually nine years in the making. It's based on something that happened to me when I was sixteen. It was a ...

Lol! Sorry to laugh. You really took a chance here. This can be interpreted in many different ways. That's one of the things I like about it. Way to go ...

Interesting formatt, it's short, but very rarely styled. I imagine that the words highway, alive, and heart are meant to be said in a whisper or a distant voice, like ...

Thanks for the review. I know it doesn't really have a very poetic formatt. I literally wrote it late at night when I was having one of my insomnia episodes. ...

It's strange, the things you think about when you're half asleep. The world is like another dimension, like a conscious dream state. You can see, feel, touch, smell and communicate, ...

Sounds a lot like my poem "Voices", except a lot less dark. Can't wait to read the second part.

LOL! That was demented. The repetition made it all the more madning. Nice one

This one speaks to everybody, that's what I like about it. Being "perfect" is an illusion that we try to achieve in life, but without failure there is no flavor ...