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Thank you all so much for the reviews and suggestions. I've made a few changes, as far as breaking it up into three separate parts. I think this works better ...

Thank you for the advice. It is rather long. I actually wrote it off the cuff in one sitting. It's amazing what you can come up with with a note ...

I see you, but do you see me? I'm focused on your every move. Seeing you isn't easy, but somehow I'll make it through. The memories I have of you, ...

Wow, this sounds like something Edgar Allen Poe would write. I like it. It seems to me that this is a story of a murder, the murder of a significant ...

Loved it. Coffee is always a good cure for a broken heart

This speaks of loss. as if you know that the relationship has ended and all you can do is wish them well.

This seems like a poem of being rescued by someone. As if they have come to whisk you away from some miserable life, like a knight in shining armor of ...

This seems to express excitement and enlightenment of a first love. The confusion that goes along with it, as well as the curiosity.

I took a lot from this. At first, it seems like a poem about the disappointing realities of lost innocence. Then, as I read, it seems like your typical tragic ...

Wow, in some way I feel I can relate to this all too well. This was very moving to me somehow. The flow was excellent. Not too difficult to interpret. ...

This was good. Like the metaphors in this. Sounds like a poem about a lost love.

I liked this a lot. It was very beautifully written. Kind of reminds me of something I wrote a long time ago. I also liked how it went from being ...

I like it. The first part kind of reminded me of "Where the Wild Things Are." The second part with the girl reminded me of some morbid love story. Overall, ...

Not bad, just a little too short I thought. It could be a lot longer. There is a part here that I'm not quite sure of. "Not a graze in ...

This was good. It flows nicely. Plus, I don't think it needs to be any longer. It's good the way it is and it's to the point.