greenwitch94

eh' it was ok. not what i expected at all. everyone in this story seems so viel and cruel. although i guess thats why this story seems so real. besides ...

its more of a short ending then it is a short story. you should describe the situation, then describe the character proposeing to the woman.

My story starts on the day I broke through the door to Hell. I was finally able to get Barbados ( The Demon of locked doors) to forge a javelin ...

Great job on this story. it was very fluent, and was pretty easy to imagne in my head. i do that some times. only with the good stories though. XD

lol. funny story. the dragon should have been a little more rude though. like make marie do something for him to get one of his scales.

this one is just as good as the last one! i hope you'll make a third one, and maybe a fourth one!!

WOW!!! i loved it!! the vampire and the duchess. it was amazing. this story should be made into a best selling series!!

omg, thats so funny when you said what pickachu says in the pokemon languge!! LOLZ :)

oh bravo, bravo!!1 it was very, very good!!!! :)

i thought this was supposed to be an ending not a beginning!!! it was so not better than the original.

wow, awsome job!!! it's like it's from an actual screen play of Supernatural. by the way i love that show. Ruby is such a mulipulative BITCH!!!

i like this. i kept saying to myself that it would be so cool if Ameilia turned Claire into a vampire. i didnt imagine it going like this but its ...

its ok. i mean its not bad but its very much like a bad version of the the first book. why does her mark have to different?, why cant she ...

really good!! i bet this is what the book would say if it was from edward's point of veiw insted of bella's ^_^.........YAY for Twilight!!

oh my f-ing god!!! this is so f-ing hillarious!!!!