greenjay

I only have two suggestions: 1) Read through this and correct punctuation, spelling, and grammar. I know they're horrible :P, but they are necessary. 2) Post more often. I read ...

10/10 cause, 1. guitars rock (or guitar like things :p), and 2. that person is wearing a cool cloak :P. Snoink, you stopped at my avie so you have to ...

Mathias We had almost made it. We were almost there. The door loomed before me, and I reached for the handle. Suddenly a door not a few paces from us ...

The tracks were clear, for any type of dwarf, even a Dugon, leave large deep tracks. Something was gnawing at the back of Philip’s mind, but as usual, after a ...

“Your allays in the mountains,” Ianna said suddenly. “Who are they?” Allies. When she spoke to Aedaan, she said nothing of this attachment, nor of what it was costing her ...

Coolness...I don't really have any suggestions. But it's good. -GJ

Brad crouched on his perch, glad of the thick feathers covering his wings and glad that his wings were large enough to wrap around his entire body Here's some nitpicking ...

Err...okay. But it gets kind of annoying :P. 6/10 -The GJ

Mathias The door to the trophy room creaked open and I peeked through the small gap. No one was in sight. I pulled the door open and stepped in, jumping ...

Err...It's got a big head...and no puples which is kind of weird. But it's eating a cookie and I like cookies :D...but it's kinda bland so 6/10. -GJ

Banned for watching me :P. -GJ

Mathias Once again Alana came first, jumping high and grasping the edge of the wall firmly. I pulled her quickly up and motioned for Quin to come. She came, only ...

“By the way, you spelled ‘Antoinette’ wrong.” Haha :P As it seems to be working swimmingly Ah? I would suggest using another word here. I know it's on her blog, ...

Mathias My hand gripped the cold stone of the top of the wall, and I hoisted myself up. I helped the rest of the group up one by one. The ...

Tyrin "Not far to the tunnel, come on," I said harshly, trying to get them moving. The forest went by us and we traveled into the night. The dark hours ...