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We need to finish this up here. Deron The halls led the group to the sewers, and the sewers led them out of the city. The boy, Deron, happily breathed ...

Suddenly Philip woke up. His hand reached for his sword, but he stayed it. Someone was approaching and he wanted to know who and why before he did anything. Another ...

Got nothin' to say but goodjob! -the bane of all blue jays

“This is you first lesson in what it means to be a mage. In one hand you hold magic; and in the other is your sword. Use them simultaneously.” Your ...

Hey, sorry it took me so long to get to this. I haven't been on much lately... He slipped on a loose black shirt and his white jacket. He also ...

Sorry it took me so long. Deron The boy gasped as he saw the guard. The four Rogues went towards him, but Deron was faster, pulling out his dagger and ...

Chapter2 The King of the West The muscles bulged from underneath the black horse’s glossy coat and he snorted, impatient to get started on the long journey ahead. The rider ...

Hey! Sorry it took so long for me to get to this...I've been busy :P. “Come one!” He said. Knall jumped to the other platform, using his wings to direct ...

:( Sorry! Wish you could post...I have that same problem...I'm not sure if I should keep posting... -GJ

Hey, I suggest we all do some kind of wrap up for the War of Zynar. We can have our characters escape through some sort of underground passage or something ...

Err...not really that funny...and the green letters look really wierd with to red face and stuff...6/10 -GJ

Tyrin The wall began to glow and Karana began to read what the runes said. "Go to where the fire burns, there will be the key..." We all looked at ...

Good job. I actually didn't find anything to critque, but I would say that it would be easier if you posted the story in different sections...that's just my thought. -GJ

Dying bannana? Normally I would think it was funny but the pic's jsut kinda wierd with the brick and everything. 5/10 -GJ

Sweetness Mathias "RUN!" I yelled to Alana as more guards poored in. The king made a slash at my head and I blocked it with my bracer, stabbing him in ...