greenjay

Just one suggestion before I start. You might not want to post so often. Maybe it's just that I don't get on all that much, but it seems like you ...

24 is right. Dominic swallowed heavily as he saw them staring at him.‭ ‬He didn't know exactly what to tell them‭…‬so he decided not to [try] any sort of inspirational ...

The black shied away from the stable door and Philip put a reassuring hand on the horse’s back. It was the middle of the night, and he knew that the ...

Come on guys, you just have to wrap up your character then we'll be done...it's not that hard.

Haha! This is a good chapter :D. Great job! -Me

Yay, another one :D! Sorry it took me so long to get to it. I've been gone a lot. As you moved around you also saw Vith with a string ...

Sorry it took me so long to get to it. Mistress J’engar managed it,” Fenn said bluntly . “And she hated our guts, didn’t she.” You used "Fenn said bluntly" ...

Third normally and first everyonce in a while. I did write a piece in second person though :D. That was fun... -the GJ

It had been largely overtaken by the vegetation, but the throne room was largely clean, and would serve them well. Mostly would be a better word. That's the only suggestion ...

Boy, it took you a while to get this one out :P. That's no problem though, gave me some time to rest :wink: . I really don't have anything to ...

Okay, that's fine. If the rest of you want to wrap up your character that'd be great (you know, walk off into the sunset...or maybe do something more realistic like ...

Err...I'm confused :? . The first section about the ward or whatever is kind of confusing. I could probably read it through again and get it, but the point is ...

Wound of the Earth? SWEET! Maybe I'll finally find out what's going on :D. It was created by the great battle by Kynth and the mysterious power that Derez feared ...

It's almost done...say your last words :twisted:. ~GJ

Deron The boy smiled. He reached up and brushed his dark hair out of his face. Quietly he turned around and slipped into the forest, unnoticed amidst the loud discussion. ...