greenjay

Sweet! Goodjob, I like this chapter. -Greenie

One spirits handed the one that seemed to be in charge a needle with a long, grey tube coming out of the end. One spirit handed The closed his eyes ...

Cool! This is a sweet part. Goodjob! -the green one

I don't have anything to add, but I just want to say I'm going to be gone for a few days (sorry).

Tyrin Karana turned to the man, who strangely resembled a tree. "You care to explain, sir?" "No...I don't; but I was rash, and though they got much less than they ...

He ignores the food and cradled his head in his hands. ignored He went on through out his day, discussing the finer details of battle with a combat expert, and ...

Tyrin No man could best me. I had 116 years of training behind me and though my strength was not superhuman (in human form), I was still very strong. I ...

Not bad. You'll have to be very careful to stay away from cliches though for the next chapters. Goodjob. -the green one

Three men joined the growing group, loggers by their look. The pixie looked at me strangely, wondering at my sudden swaying in the still evening. I then did something I'd ...

That section was a little bit confusing, but more random than confusing. Anyway, I'm sure you'll explain it later. Goodjob. -the jay of green

Tyrin (happens before my last post) I walked slowly towards the city gates, not wanting to draw attention. I passed under the large green wall and entered the city. A ...

Khor sat next to him and another grey-thing drifted over and put a large glass of swirling ice d tea on a small platform next to the chair. Khor took ...

Sup Polt. Me again... Knall was running as fast as his feet could carry him. He felt the wind blow by his face and the grass [s]blow [/s] swishing by ...

Name: Tyrin Race: Dryad Age: 126 years (a young dryad) Appearance: a young oak sapling or a tall young man with very curly brown hair depending on his shape Special ...

“Yes. They are the kings of Yeseve. They attempt to maintain peace and happiness and ("in" would be better than "and") this turbulent world.” Khor nodded to show he understood. ...