greenjay

No Tas isn't a Rogue, he's part of the Kingdom of Zynar, from Xnrom. Sorry bout that.

Tyrin I stood up, towering above the rest of the group. "Hey, when I was sixteen I wasn't even up to your waist Julia...and that isn't very high," I teased; ...

That's good. Nice idea. Mathias I saw Tas leave the wall and smiled...Cameron was not far behind. If he did not pass this test, I would have to deal with ...

Sweet! That's all I have to say :P -greenie

Can't see much (you're probably tired of hearing that by now :P) but what I can see is really good! You should draw a pic of Brad. -GJ

Cool, things look good, but we do need other people besides Rogues aswell. Mathias I stood atop the rock overlooking the Rogue camp. A clear voice rose in the breeze, ...

Mathias I pushed the tent flap aside and walked out into the fresh summer night. The cool wind calmed my nerves and I reminisced on what had happened. The native ...

Name: Known usually as the Head, Mathias Team/position: The feared leader of the Rogues Weapons: hand-axes he attaches to his bracers (blade curves over his fist), I might give him ...

Assassin, knight, bounty hunter, or barbarian? Take up your command in this world of war! Basically it's this. There are many different groups in the land of Zynar, many different ...

Brad landed smoothly on the top of the steps, the tips of his wings brushing the walls on either side of the stairs as he braked and his feet touched ...

Sweet! The escape....Does Vathan know everyone? Who could he be? Hmmmmmm? Anyway, I didn't find anything wrong, except what sokool already said, so I don't have much to say :D. ...

Tyrin The smoke rose in swirling tendriles from the dying ashes of our fire. I came slowly from the trees, in a pensive mood after the good meal i'd had. ...

Ya that's good. After we fight through a lot of zombis and then defeat the gargoyles, the wizard could come riding a Wyvern to fight us! Fun for all :D. ...

The coolest part ever?! Oo, oo, I'm excited. I'll read it now :D. It opened and they stepp[s]ing[/s] ed inside. Derez quickly found the wheel and rested his hand on ...

Looking out on the sunlit grass and the blue river, circling around the tower and out of sight. this isn't a complete sentance (don't you hate grammar) It was luckily ...