greenjay

Ianna J’engar-ai was the last of her kind; one of the few royal families left , hers (I'd say start a new sentance here) had been a particularly potent line, ...

Ahh...yup...they about covered it all. It's an info dump, but if you could make it less info-dumpish you might pull it off. Don't ask me what that means, just follow ...

Hi Emi! Thanks for joining. Mathias I stood and exited, allowing the boy to have my seat. I normally would have been angry at him, but I was too preoccupied ...

He tiredly stood and stretched out his arms, causing his wings to stretch out even further. "He stood tiredly" would be better. Hehe. Derez turned the rock into a sword:D. ...

Tyrin I approached the cave slowly. Karana was lying on the ground, wounded but alive, and Warren lay beside her, much the same. I walked silently into the cave and ...

Tyrin My staff cracked the skull of the nearest zombi, and then they were upon us. Hordes of them surrounded us, ever encroching closer, tightening their noose about our necks. ...

Hi Amber! Thanks for joining. Mathias The cool darkness of my tent enveloped me and I pulled the heavy helmet off my head. I whipped the sweet off of my ...

Maybe I'm just blind or somethin, but I can't really tell what that is. 6/10 I guess. -me

My character Rathur got a 14. Not all that bad but not all that good. He's kind of a stu (er whatever) except for the fact that he's a KILLER ...

Hmm...*Ponders.* I might be good at action, or maybe just making stuff up...Arg! You made me think. Now I'll have to figure out what I'm good at :P. Anywho, nice ...

Mathias I came out of the sky and landed right behind the barbarian, renching the axe out of his grip. The barbarian stood facing Alana, and all see saw was ...

Cool. I didn't find anything to this is a pointless post :P. I was a little confused :? , but I'm not really supposed to know what's going on so ...

:twisted: *rubs hands together gleefully* :twisted: I've been looking forward to this! Did you change it some? It seems a bit different, maybe shorter. Anyway here I go. Let's see ...

The barbarians looked at me wide eyed, fearful, and wondering from whence I came. I did not alot them the time to ponder, but instead stepped forward, slitting the nearest ...

Sweet! I finally found it :D. Here I go. Crystal was now running uphill, with the ranger's station perched on top [s]atop the hill[/s]. She could feel her legs growing ...