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Re: Magic's Curse pt 3
P.S. That creature ROCKS! I love that idea...sounds kind of like a shade but cooler and bigger! You're a genius. -GJ
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Magic's Curse pt 3
Silence and darkness ate away at Khor’s flesh and mind. He had followed the sound of the stream and it had led him to the place that had nearly killed ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Magic's Curse pt. 2
Khor is back! :) I always did like his character. Is this like a prequal to Pure Magic? Something drew him to the chasm. [s]and[/s] I t enthralled him. [s]This ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Magic's Curse
Polt! Your alive! :P What's been up? Sadly I missed the ending of Pure Magic, but I'll just read it when you get it published :wink:. Anyway, I really liked ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Caste of the Spider-- part one
Hey. There's not much for me to say that hasn't already been said. Much is still uncertain as to how this will turn out, but I cannot judge off so ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Child Of The Flame - A short story
Hey. First I want to say that it was good, though a little too short. How could I let him die? How could I be so selfish as to steal ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chosen Way
Hey one and all. I've reappeared, and still probably won't be on much, but here is something of mine anyway. -GJ A soft breeze played through the leaves like a ...
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: EON. Everything or nothing!
As these thoughts were sprinting through his mind the captain nodded to one of his soldiers who quickly approached the Vancan and used the butt of his rife to knock ...
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: Mercenary Wings 26
I haven't been on in forever, so I might be a bit out of context, but I think I've read all of them up to here (correct me if you ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
I was thinking about doing something with this guy where we'd both post our stories, and then we'd critique each other's stories. So here's the dumb question. If someone else ...
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: The Blue King ~ Chapter Thirty-seven
Aww...isn't that cute...........you didn't spell anything wrong....looks like you've stumped me again, I got nothin'. Good job. And so I end, -Me
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: The Blue King ~ Chapter Thirty-five and Thirty-six
Weelll, att lest u gayve mi sumthing 2 kerect :D. -grene jey
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: The Blue King ~ Chapter Thirty-five and Thirty-six
“the throne is mine—I must claim it—but what I am without her?” but what am I without her. deispaire it's despare I think you need to lengthen the talk between ...
Nov 5, 2007 -
Re: War of Zynar
Deron Tas stood tall on the sparkling wall. It had taken much work to restore the city to the grandure that it was now in, just as it had taken ...
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: The Blue King ~ Chapter Thirty-four
“Get off my throne.” Hehe... I didn't find anything wrong AGAIN. Come on, you got to make some spelling mistakes or I'll just keep having to post pointless posts like ...
Nov 2, 2007
