greenjay

Yay! Yet another section in the wonderful saga :D. “Stop being stupid. The more you forbid it the more I want to help you.” “You’re something Rakari.” You forgot to ...

:shock: *turnes and glances around nervously* Gulp. Very good job! You scared me :P. I only have one suggestion. The mood in this piece is somewhat off. It starts out ...

Hmm...who should die? I could. That would probably work :D. -greenie

Come on. It would be good if we could at least have a basic idea before we start with the assassination.

Tyrin We marched through the forest, the line of questers stretching out behind me. The tunnel was drawing near. I knew that once we entered, whatever or whoever guarded the ...

Count me in. -the green one

Mathias I walked toward the group riding the wolf. He growled and Tas jumped, turning around to see me aproach. "Are you ready?" I asked the trio, and they all ...

As they traveled on Knall noticed there seemed to be something humongous and gray in the far off distance. big or large might be a better word. He suddenly wasn’t ...

Kiera raised her head and took a welcome breath of fresh air as they hovered, barely in motion in the air. you forgot that :P Aww! Poor Brad...ya, anyway good ...

No one else told me about the site; I was searching for a forum for young writers because I desperately wanted something like this, or a writer pen pal, or ...

Hey! I remember you :P. Hope this account doesn't mess up :D, see ya around and about. -GJ

9/10, not too colorful but sweet! Kinda dark and depressing but it still rocks. ;)

Mathias I tapped her lightly on the shoulder and Alana spun around quickly, her knife outstretched. I smiled, pleased. "Are you ready?" "Yes," she said, lowering the knife. Quin and ...

Ah...unnecessary is all that I can say. How does it help the plot anyway? I mean, I have romance in my novel, but this isn't even romantic, it's just...too much. ...

" When you do your magic it will feel even more powerful and you will need to practice on taming that as well. I apologize if that is not a ...