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Re: The Sapphire Princess Chapter 1
Hello, I really liked the story! There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing serious! Seeing that this is chapter one, I kinda felt like everything was so ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: All good things must come to an end. ( Part 1 )
I thought this was great! At first I got a little confused with the tenses but caught on! I encourage you to keep writing and pursue your dreams, you have ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: My Sister Lauren (Chapter 1)
My Sister Lauren By: Jenna S. Please Tell Me What You Think (: It was a calm Saturday night. The wind whistled lightly through the trees. It hadn’t been that ...
Aug 8, 2011
