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Re: My pathetic love story Chap. 1
(if I ever got up the nerve to talk to him for more than five minutes) Capital 'If' and period after 'minutes' “Zac, come over here, leave the weird goth ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: untitled ( the raid maybe) -part one
I put my gun agents the back of his neck and my arm round his head, and trusted forward to make him walk again. This really confused me but I ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Darkness and Light
She mulled over the thought of her first boy friend dumping her that day. "boyfriend" is one word. She had found out that he had got together with the school ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Romance Suggestions
Meg Cabot writes a lot of romances. Her Princess Diaries series is hilarious. She also writes romance/fantasy-ish stuff. I'm not sure if that's what you are looking for or just ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Stolen
Unable to watched the ceremony, I glanced down on my clutching hands and remembering the day she told me. I think you mean 'watch' and not 'watched.' There were a ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Illusions of Life (2nd Draft- Horror/Fantasy)
Well, it seems that everybody else pretty much covered up everything else. I didn't read the very first post, but I don't think I will. It was very interesting! I ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: An Autumn to Remember
'Singing in the shower is one of Autumn Johnson's many talents.' I don't think singing in the shower is actually a talent. Singing is. But singing in the shower...I don't ...
Oct 26, 2008
