goodolnoah

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary He was created by magic, therefore smashing all the odds that he really was a dickface like all the other kin of the sea. As ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary a long strand of blackness extending from his fingertips to the book Josephine was looking at. The LORE, so yummy. I liked the section where ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The whole scene with Persephone, and this chapter was a rollercoaster of emotions. Especially the scene with Persephone and Josephine having a heartfelt conversation.

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone hesitated but closed her eyes, her chestnut silken locks falling from the intricate bun that Josephine had spent hours working on for her. Among ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary A freezing grip wrapped around her wrist, and she was pulled down as well—the muffled and waterlogged screams of the other contestants vibrating throughout the ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Writing is great as always! I liked the added descriptions of Medusa’s snakes moving around and occasionally hissing to express the emotions she may have ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine hadn’t heard those words in a while. She looked at the stairs beneath her, refusing to make eye contact with her new acquaintance. It ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Just a little update-I’ve been enjoying this story so far! Your descriptions have been inspiring, electric, varied, and beautiful! I think my favorite part thus ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “I should postpone the Trials for the next few days until we find her,” Zeus said, “For the next Trial, we require a specific number ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine knew she didn’t want to quit the Trials. She made it to the fourth Trial, which barely anybody ever got to—alive. She had much ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “This complicates things, though. You see, I need a Champion. Someone who is willing to put their life before others. Someone who is willing to ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary It hit her that her father has to be what—or in his case, who—she was afraid of most. She was frightened by just him, because ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase grabbed Josephine by the wrist and led both girls into the trees, the smell of sulfur engulfing them as if they were in an ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine had never seen someone more handsome than the specimen standing in front of them. His eyes were a cloudy gray, and his stark-black hair ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far! It had me hooked from beginning to end! From the anticipation up to the fight ...