goatgirl

Thanks for telling me about this site! In answer to your questions, Y, I'm reading several books at the moment, including Einstein's Beetle and The Taming of the Shrew (though ...

Shy Eyes. I can see them. I can sense them. And they look at me, And they inspect me, And suddenly I’m different. I feel my legs begin to shake. ...

This poem is absolutely amazing! I liked the way you used the crying child to add a personal aspect for the reader, which made it gain in interest and emotion. ...

This is amazing! It makes what has happened really clear without actually narrating the scene. I feel bad just putting good comments, but I can't really think of much you ...

Hi, I'm new to this site, and it all seems confusing! I'd like to talk to other people who like writing (and if you like goats, cacti, gardening, reading, looking ...

This is a moving piece which must have been hard to write. Perhaps doing it non-rhyming would have been better as it gives you more freedom - I find less ...

This was really good - I like the way you don't tell the reader much about what's going on! You've got a bit of repetition in the first paragraph (the ...