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That was a good start! As i was reading it, I was like...wait, this sounds like a Disney movie I've seen before. And then you said that at the bottom ...

*Reviews and comments welcomed! Hope you enjoy!* I Miss You; Chapter 2 My bedroom was a place that was entirely my own. I could put anything in it, and my ...

The next morning as I walked toward my locker, I saw Maddie and Alex waiting for me there. As usual, Alex had one hand holding Maddie’s, while the other was ...

wow. this is just a school project?? you should definitely turn this into something, if you would want to. It's really good!! If you don't get an A from your ...

Hmmm. This sounds like it will turn into a really good story. I liked how you put that the Becca girl was dead, and then all of a sudden she ...

This sounds interesting! I'm wondering what the ''incident'' is....? You should keep going, and develop your story! Don't forget to check over some of your grammar errors, such as the ...

*Reviews and criticism appreciated! =]* Thin Air 1 I woke to the feeling of crinkly bed sheets and beeping sounds. And heaviness. Never before in my life had I felt ...

pretty good! this is a prologue, so it makes sense on how things aren't exactly clear yet. At first i was thinking, maybe add some more background on the characters ...

come on!! just have melody hook up with Nathan already! he's my fav by the way. hahah. you're really good. keep goin! these chapters are addicting!

WHOA. HOLD UP! that is really confusing. having their names all the same in a way? i was getting mixed up just reading it! but it does at to the ...

Oh. My. Goodness. I laughed so hard when her mom was buying her the bras. HAHA! That is exactly what I would do! Plus, my mom would be talking the ...

man. you're really good! I love how you get right to the point of what's happening in your story without making it seem like it's going to fast. and i'm ...

man. you're really good! I love how you get right to the point of what's happening in your story without making it seem like it's going to fast. and i'm ...

wow. i can't tell you enough how much i like this. it's like...hard to describe, because how you write little sentences always makes me want more than there is. and ...

i know before i had said the formatting of your story was very interesting, but it actually makes it harder to read. maybe just add more to a line so ...