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Very interesting! I'd like to start out that even though you're going with the popular "vampire and werewolf" theme, you've put an intriguing spin on it with the whole Creatures ...

Wow. This is really really REALLY intriguing. And it definitely starts out with the right amount of "umph" to actually keep the interest of the reader past the first few ...

I remember wishing I would become the victim of some sort of freak accident, just so he would realize his true feelings for me. How he would think in that ...

Alright. =] Over all, it was pretty good! It seemed to move a bit fast. Like, after one day, this girl is already in love with Cassius. At least she ...

I thought this was absolutely brilliant. When i first read how you were trying to make the character childish, but still adult like in a way, I was thinking...."What?" But ...

HAHA. i love your writing. It seriously makes me laugh out loud. I can totally see this going somewhere!! I'm excited for when you post next! =] Good job, so ...

Wow. This is an action packed story, most definitely. For starters, I thought you could've put more information into the story. Who was Tom? I didn't really get that. And ...

Hey, I'll be reviewing your story today! So, I thought over all, it was okay. Prologues usually are written in a very mysterious way, that leaves the reader wanting more, ...

Hello! I'm going to be you're reviewer today. =] To start off, this seems like the start of a fairy tale! I'm intrigued! But, to get into the more critique-ish ...

This was pretty interesting! The only thing is that you repeat yourself and say the same thing in a number of different sentences. It does set the mood, though. Over ...

This was pretty interesting! The only thing is that you repeat yourself and say the same thing in a number of different sentences. It does set the mood, though. Over ...

Alright. First I'm gonna say I'm sorry, because I realized that when Renee was put into her cell, it was dark, and she probably couldn't have seen Will. And that's ...

Alright. First I'm gonna say I'm sorry, because I realized that when Renee was put into her cell, it was dark, and she probably couldn't have seen Will. And that's ...

I agree with cjscoot. I got kind of confused, because when I first started reading, I thought it was taking place in medieval time periods, hence the jail thing. And ...

This is really good! I liked it even better than the first chapter!! When you had written, "Holy shit!" I said releasing my anger to the world. Two old women ...