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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Shapeless Silence

    Hello Max, I%u2019m thankful for your review and I appreciate the suggestion - I%u2019ll edit it as soon as possible. I read a poem called Bonedog by Eva H.D recently, ...

    Jan 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    I appreciate your commentary. Perhaps I%u2019ll be able to reach a common ground for us in my future pieces.

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    There%u2019s no need to apologize and what I meant is: No one thinks using correct grammar all the time. Sentences are disorganized, words are repeated often, thoughts come back and ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    Thank you for the review, but as my, as I appreciate it, I believe I won%u2019t correct it. As you mentioned, there are some faults in the punctuation and at ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    Thank you for the review, and I am glad you liked it!

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Shapeless Silence

    Jesus, this is so bugged. What I meant was: thank you for pointing out the typo and not any of these nonsensical numbers.

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Shapeless Silence

    Thank you for the review and for noticing the %u201CI%u201D, in all honesty, it was a typo and I am super embarrassed I haven%u2019t noticed it earlier.

    Jan 10, 2021


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